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The pain, the sorrow.
Is it there in you?
Are you blind to mine?
For every time you look,
You never take a clue.
It's always there to see,
But you only turn away.
You should know how I feel.
You feel it too,
And yet you're blind
My eyes are bleeding,
can't you see?
My ears are tearing,
can't you hear?
My heart is breaking,
can't you feel?
You're blind to me.
You see the details,
Not the picture.
Can you hear the sobs?
Can you see the pain?
It's right in front of you, right there.
And yet you're blind.
My eyes are bleeding,
can't you see?
My ears are tearing,
can't you hear?
My heart is breaking,
can't you feel?
You're blind to me.
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This is a song I wrote . 3. called Blind. Any questions? just ask. Criticism is much obliged.

EDIT: :iconseeric-black: is helping with the music so yeah credit goes to him as well =w=~ and if you have any questions about the music ask him.
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:iconseeric-black:
This thing was only faved by 4 people... maybe if i hurry up and record it i can increase that number...
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~Rollsah May 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
xDDDD lolz maybe, maybe not =P
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:iconseeric-black:
Seeing as I am doing the music for this, I would like to say something. Rebecca said criticism is much obliged. Um, to say this lightly... No, its not. Dont critique it. The composition of the music is done. Any edits to the lyrics to fit music will be done by me and Rebecca, and frankly any edits you think would be good in the song, will not. I felt this song close to my heart as well, I took it at an emotional level. It will be done to what is within my ability, so sorry to cramp your style Rebecca, but if you have anything you want to share or something you think she should change. You can post it. I can say right now that any changes wont happen.
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~Rollsah May 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I want critics so I know better what to do when I write again, I'm not going to edit this. Nowhere did I say that.
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:iconseeric-black:
Yes, but my point is, that from the musicians perspective, this came straight from deep emotion. You cannot "do better" than that. Therefore, no one can really criticize this. Music is expression. It has no laws. Only rules. Which are only guidelines. All rules in music are breakable, and not frowned upon if broken.
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~Rollsah May 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
meh. fine >xp
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~1Bluefur May 19, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Duuude, this is awesome! I approve \m/
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~Rollsah May 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:D thanks!
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:iconseeric-black:
Because I like to release only teasers until the final product, all I am willing to say at this point is that the song is in a minor key. Mwahahaha. (and no, Rebecca knows nothing about the musical aspect, so you wont get any info out of her. xD)
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~Rollsah May 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
=w=~ tee hee.
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